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Cinderella

By Abigail Zajac, 18

Have courage and be kind they said

My entire life I’ve had a weighted heart on a breaking chain

I wept courageously through the pain

But a lady doesn’t cry they said

So I desperately ran down the stairs

W a n t i n g

C r a v i n g

Any other ending to the story

I was left with the moral:

life is a crescendoing waltz whose steps I don’t know

But a lady’s not meant to ask questions they said

I guess it’s a good thing there was a man there to teach me how to dance

What a charming prince he is

He even tried to follow me home

It’s love at first sight they said

From his view I’m sure

He scoured the land looking for me

It’s a fairy tale they said, 

every woman’s dream

Then why couldn’t he remember me?

my laugh

my face

my eyes

my cheeks

Why then did he need a shoe to prove it was me?

Now I have a wedding ring 

and he never forgets to call me his property


I like to write poems from the perspectives of women, fictional or real, who have inspired me. Growing up, Cinderella was my favorite fairytale; I was always captivated by her kindness and courage. As I got older, I read the Grimm Brothers’ version along with many darker retellings of the beloved tale. So when I decided to put myself in her glass slippers, I wanted it to be through a feminist lens. This poem is about the hurt I think she feels throughout her story and the pressures of womanhood that she faces.

Photo by Jared Subia

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